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The Untitled

The Untitled

15.5K Reads 951 Votes 28 Part Story
Julie By giddygoat Completed

Joe and Leven were created in a lab to serve two very different purposes; save and slay. Joe has just one life to save, Leven has countless to end. Born as enemies, they share a brief but precious friendship before Leven’s refusal to submit to her creator throws both their lives into chaos. 
Years later, in the midst of a warfare that is eradicating supernatural beings at a vicious rate, Joe unexpectedly finds Leven. Still the self-sufficient girl he once knew he comes to realise that she is the lone assassin wreaking havoc with the shared enemy they want destroyed. Despite her resolve to stay alone Joe urges her to join his group of supernatural warriors; with her strength, skills and knowledge he knows that she could be the one thing that will help them win the war. 
But more than that, after all this time, Joe doesn’t want to lose her again.

The concept of your story kept me reading.  Sometimes you got bogged down with too much description.  Not often do I find a story that is interesting enough to over look the grammatical errors.
giddygoat giddygoat Jul 28, 2013
@BekkiPate Thanks for your comments! I hope you enjoy the rest of the story :-)
LauraConrod LauraConrod Mar 20, 2013
I swore at the end of this chapter, but can't write what I said. I wish Leven would have a chance if she just left the building with her Sam.
LauraConrod LauraConrod Mar 20, 2013
I like this story - only on the first chapter, looking forward to reading on.
bloodsword bloodsword Feb 24, 2013
Nicely done, the exchange between Joe and Leven.  Made me feel truly bad for Leven and what they're about to do to her.
bloodsword bloodsword Feb 24, 2013
A very interesting premise.  I like the idea of bio-engineering Joe to help his mom, and the ruthless nature of his father.  The things we'll do for love, hey?  =)  Thanks for sharing, Julie.