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3.3K Reads 167 Votes 11 Part Story
Becky and Dan By BeckyAndDan Updated Nov 06, 2012


DawnGhost DawnGhost Oct 10, 2012
Whoa. Thanks for introducing me to this gem. Awesome descriptions---made everything so sharp and vivid. I'm so adding this to my library. Great job! :)
Tania_Re Tania_Re Oct 09, 2012
Oh, i loved the prologue! :D It hooked me definitely! The plot is so interesting, not a cliche just unique. You use awesome descriptions and you made me want to read more ! I will keep reading :D
ArmyOfLove ArmyOfLove Oct 09, 2012
Descriptions = Amazing
                              Through out this whole part it just got better and better and I could feel myself being drawn in
VogueVita VogueVita Oct 06, 2012
The beginning was a little slow but it definitely gets better! This was such a good read and I'm genuinely excited to read more! xx
BeckyAndDan BeckyAndDan Sep 18, 2012
@AlexMcGilvery Thank you for the explanation of attribution! I will correct that right now. Also thank you for the eye opener about the blurb, I hadn't considered I was giving away too much. :)
- - Sep 17, 2012
I love your description. You words sound like something you'd find in real book rather then the vague descriptions most people right on her. I'm one of them :/  I also appreciate the length. It's not super long. It just the right amount to keep the readers interested. U did a really good job