It's My Fate

It's My Fate

4.7K Reads 335 Votes 12 Part Story
Valine By Valine Updated Jan 06, 2013

Ariel was just a normal girl with a normal family. Father working in a small company and mom a babysitter. When her father went for a three months business trip, Ariel and her mom received a phone call saying otherwise. This changed her normal world upside down.

  • family
  • fate
  • love
  • twist
solicitude solicitude Mar 12, 2013
Aw just had to say, I LOVE the book cover :) Your other story got me intrigued so I just had to click on this one! I can't wait to get reading :) x
CaitlynTheresa CaitlynTheresa Jan 08, 2013
I know you wanted me to read the new chapter - at least that's where the link led - but I don't really like doing that cause it's hard to give good feeback if you don't know the story
_cynical _cynical Dec 10, 2012
I think I should not have read the introduction too much because hahaa it was somewhat a spoiler, but I will read on, and find out why her life turned out that way
GreenDayPenguin GreenDayPenguin Nov 07, 2012
i wish I could write a summary of my story. I'm not really sure how so yeah.
EmmaMayfield EmmaMayfield Nov 06, 2012
First thing - NEVER tell everyone things about your character. Weave it into the story instead of giving them spoilers :)
bridgetwrites bridgetwrites Nov 03, 2012
Sounds good so far. You might try making it a bit longer but otherwise it was pretty good. It sparks curiosity in the reads and there were no grammar or spelling errors that I saw. :)