Blind Soul (On Hold)

Blind Soul (On Hold)

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Potato By Songless Updated May 15, 2011

Late at night, Zack lays in bed. He listens, and he hears voices. He hears the dead calling his name. He doesn't know why. He doesn't know how. He just wants them gone. But when he finds he has the power to make the sighted people blind, will he be able to undo his curse?  Dorit, a twelve year old Jew living in Germany, 1943, is blind. She wishes nothing more than to see flowers. Color. Life. Her mother tells her a story of a legendary flower planted by an evil king that makes the blind see. Dorit has doubts, but when she starts seeing evil spirits, and her bleak future, will she be able to undo the past?  What would you do if you could hear the dead? Would you be afraid? Excited? Amazed? Well, Zack can do just that. He doesn't know why or how, but he can hear the dead whispering in his ear at night. 'We are the blind souls...' They say.  They know his name, his family, his history. Zack starts to feel paranoid when they start following him. He feels even more paranoid when they tell him to go to 'eternal bliss'. But one day, he did something terrible. On the account of 'Blind Souls', he tries to run away from his problems, but finds himself in a place beyond what he'd ever know.

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PiecesofaTeen PiecesofaTeen Aug 14, 2011
uhh i like the ending it makes you want to continue the story, I really like it because from the start you already had me hulked to the story so well done. I will continue reading xx