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Taking his woman's heart

Taking his woman's heart

1.1M Reads 18.9K Votes 34 Part Story
Katy By katy_1988 Completed

Jake Travis doctor and billionaire wanted nothing more than to find the woman of his dreams but yet the the lovely but prickly Officer Louise Ohara of the Texas police department had his attention well and truly stuck.
Louise ohara holds in all the pain that still haunts her and a secret that few are privvy to. She has guarded her heart against playboys with a devil may care attitude but when it came to Jake TRavis her walls that encased her heart were at risk of falling under his charms.
See what happens when these two firey personalities clash time and time again in tension and passion and will the playboy doctor finally take his womans heart.

VulpesLagopus VulpesLagopus Oct 29, 2015
The story seems fine but you might want to sprinkle in a few commas here and there.
XxFlyingAcexX XxFlyingAcexX Jun 07, 2013
Awesome prologue! I appreciate you using third person rather that first in this. There are a few spelling and grammar mistakes you might not be aware of but you have me intrigued. Who is this woman that has him so entranced? Can't wait to read more :)
CrimsonNyx CrimsonNyx Feb 08, 2013
Jake was one of my favorite character on the last book so can't wati to read about him and his pursuit for love
katy_1988 katy_1988 Dec 05, 2012
@LeTrang3 it's upto chapter 23 but it's like 30 pages that's what the parts mean.
LeTrang3 LeTrang3 Dec 05, 2012
So I'm confused, it says chapter 30 on ur site but my library it's only up to chapter 23... So far so good!! :)
MagdavanStraaten MagdavanStraaten Nov 09, 2012
I love ur book so far. I can not wait for the next chapter. Don't worry about  what people say, editing and updating takes time. If people have nothing good to say they must just keep it to them selfs. Rome was not build in one day.