Within The Evergreen

Within The Evergreen

1K Reads 18 Votes 4 Part Story
Chloe By starsandsky_26 Updated Jul 08, 2011

Aurora has always wanted to be human; to live a normal life instead of moving from town to town, her secrets forever haunting her. When her and her 'family' move to a yet another small town, Aurora hopes that the few years she spends here will allow her to at last get a taste of an ordinary life.
But unexpected surprises await in this small town.Torn between old faces and drawn to a charming boy with eyes the colour of the earth, Isabelle's life is going to be anything but ordinary. 
She lost the love of her life once, will she lose him again?

  • ben
  • boat
  • evergreen
  • faerie
  • isabelle
  • jacob
  • paranormal
  • romance
  • shifter
  • vampire
  • werewolf
BeyondBirthday_1246 BeyondBirthday_1246 Dec 25, 2011
Really very good sorry I've taken so long I have a big family I've been so busy but I keep my promises very very good keep writing
Diane_Star16 Diane_Star16 Apr 06, 2011
wow i lov it lov it lov it.... cant wait for the next chapter
starsandsky_26 starsandsky_26 Apr 05, 2011
thanks guys! You've seriously made my day! haha
                              working on the next chapter and got the most part of my story worked out in my head :) hopefully be up within the next couple of days
starsandsky_26 starsandsky_26 Apr 05, 2011
Thanks :) i may change the opening yet although that's kind of what i was going for, leave the shocker till the end to make people want to find out more in the next part
smaoineamh smaoineamh Apr 05, 2011
you are a talented writer. i like your descriptions and the fact that you're working on something really original. and you have one of the most intriguing story beginnings i've read so far! please keep posting!
ChristianRose ChristianRose Apr 05, 2011
All I can say is maybe add a bit more description? Add a bigger hook in the BEGINNING of this page, not the end.