We all die.
The goal isn't to live forever,
the goal is to create something
something that will.
While it's quite long it's very good, I recommend shorting the chapters adds more suspense
Your writing is amazing! The descriptions in it make me feel like I'm actually watching it! I would leave a longer comment full of praise but I have to read on :)
Alfred mastered the art of awesomeness before it was awesome. B)