Immortal

Immortal

4.3K Reads 70 Votes 5 Part Story
Arvy Ngo Shuji-kun By ArvyNgoShuji-kun Updated Jun 22, 2012

When brothers Edward and Mark's lives are forever altered after they fail a necromantic ritual, they are plunged into the depths of magic. Their journey first started as a quest to revive their dead family. They meet various people along the way including a sole survivor from a not-so-distant country, a soldier who has great ambitions, and also their missing father. Will they end up succeeding in their original goal? Or will their ambitions change, like finding the elixir of immortality?

  • alchemy
  • armor
  • arvy
  • diamond
  • diamonds
  • fantasy
  • fiction
  • gates
  • immortal
  • mage
  • magic
  • necromancer
  • necromancers
  • ngo
  • ritual
  • science
DB-Merriam DB-Merriam Feb 26, 2013
You know what this sounds like?  Full Metal Alchemist mixed with The Secrets of the Immortal Nicholas Flamel.... Sweet!   I hope you keep this story going.
Sentinel Sentinel Apr 11, 2011
I like  your writing style. It just flows extremely well. Voted! 
animemangafrk1221 animemangafrk1221 Apr 11, 2011
Sounds really really good, but ur storyline/plot is VERYY similar to this manga/anime called FullMetal Alchemist. Do you by chance know this manga, or ??
                              but, its still good :D
animemangafrk1221 animemangafrk1221 Apr 11, 2011
@FalcoMcCartney IKR!?!? THAT'S EXACTLY WHAT I THOUGHT! but it's still good. 
LoveFromLetterbomb LoveFromLetterbomb Apr 10, 2011
Ahhh. I read the first sentence and thought, "Darn it. I'll never be as good of a writer as you." XD Anyway, a great story. VOTEING TIME! :DD
Anni_innA Anni_innA Apr 10, 2011
really interesting :) and this is a good start! i'll keep reading! hope you can check out my story dungeon dragon too