Floating

Floating

2.8K Reads 63 Votes 1 Part Story
Carlie By cneuzz Completed

this... this is all about you.

  • abuse
  • anger
  • away
  • baby
  • floating
  • mother
  • pain
  • polluted
  • sadness
  • short
  • stolen
  • story
  • stream
kitkat1023 kitkat1023 Aug 27, 2012
Wow, this is really really good. I like it aalot and cant wait to read your other works! <3
cneuzz cneuzz Jun 17, 2011
@TheOrangutan alrighty! I'll take your word for it :) thanks again
TheOrangutan TheOrangutan Jun 17, 2011
@cneuzz - I've edited some of my short stories countless times, but i have to say this one was good as it stands. 
cneuzz cneuzz Jun 16, 2011
@TheOrangutan thank you for the nice comments :) i also think this is one of my better pieces, but I think I'm going to try editing it. I feel like I've given too much away, or something. glad to hear you like it though :)
cneuzz cneuzz May 19, 2011
@supapenguin98 thank you soooo much!! i know, i sort of want to know what happens to her as well, but at the same time i like the way i ended it too! :) and yes, it makes TONS of sense! :) thanks for enjoying 
cneuzz cneuzz May 19, 2011
@Livin4God thank you for reading and enjoying it! you're opinion is truly appreciated :) and yeah, i know :P it's second person but still sort of first in a way... got a little confusing when i was writing :P thanks again!