My Sweet 16 Disaster (PAUSED)

My Sweet 16 Disaster (PAUSED)

2.2K Reads 42 Votes 5 Part Story
Bianca By ForeverandAlwaysx3 Updated Apr 10, 2011

Mackenzie Carter and Marissa Bennett are best friends who are throwing an insanely awesome Sweet 16 party. Mackenzie has everything planned out but when she finds out her enemy, Lindsey Leazer, is also throwing a party, she knows that she has to top it and she sets out to not accomplish this goal, but to exceed it as well.

  • best
  • betrayal
  • bieber
  • disaster
  • emotional
  • enemies
  • friends
  • girls
  • great
  • invites
  • justin
  • party
  • pretty
  • realistic
  • revenge
  • romance
  • school
  • sixteen
  • sweet
  • teen
  • teens
  • usher
- - Apr 10, 2011
there are some grammar mistakes but overall i like this :) good work!
coalesce coalesce Apr 08, 2011
Ahahaha, I just realized the irony of this XD. Happy you used my cover though, I was searching through books and found this one, so I was like - AWESOME!!!! XD It IS awesome though. 
Sinfael Sinfael Apr 07, 2011
There's some grammar errors in here, but overall this is pretty good. Your character descriptions are a little bit abrupt, though. But overall I enjoyed this. 
DeathlyAuthor DeathlyAuthor Apr 06, 2011
i love it. good description and pretty good plot . deffinatly keep going
                              
xRadioRebelx xRadioRebelx Apr 06, 2011
This is good. Aside from some grammatical errors, it's a good read. Plus, it's very flowy, which is really good for a reader! :) & it has a good hook too! Also, the descriptions are short, which for me is good... But, for other readers... Maybe not. I'm *voting*! :)
TKAnez TKAnez Apr 05, 2011
This is an interesting start. I loved your dialogue. Good job~