Fight or Flight

Fight or Flight

47 Part Story 15.5K Reads 933 Votes
Alex Fitton By AlexFitton Updated Aug 26, 2015

Laura Hale is a girl with a broken past. After being thrust into a childhood world of drugs, loan sharks and gangsters, a criminal way of life took a firm hold. When she's given the opportunity to rebuild her life after five years inside America's most brutal women's prison, will Laura be able to shake her former life or will she pay the ultimate price?

tall_girl tall_girl Dec 04, 2014 04:41PM
That last line! WOW! 
                                    
                                    This gripped me the moment I started reading it; it was as if I was watching it on a movie or tv series, I could see it all so clearly! 
                                    
                                    you're writing is amazing and I'm shocked this hasn't got more reads! 
                                    
                                    I can't wait to see what Laura does!
snickersneebee snickersneebee Aug 14, 2014 04:44AM
All right. Wow. 
                                    
                                    This snagged my attention right from the very start, and held it all the way through to the end of the chapter. You started it powerfully, and ended it with a bang... literally. Brilliantly written!!
A very good first chapter here, Alex. It's descriptive and in parts, it's almost as if I'm watching this as a movie. The chapter is emotional and it's dark - two fantastic elements of a good crime and thriller novel. I have voted for this!
ShelleyBurbank ShelleyBurbank Mar 20, 2014 02:25AM
Your writing is definitely way above average. Very talented. I wish I could read this, but I'm really squeamish about torture. This was just so sadistic and awful. I don't understand how people can treat other people this way. I hope they come to bad, bad ends.
yachoree yachoree Mar 19, 2014 11:03AM
I love how you describe the warden's office.
                                    It made me cringe.  This book is good it's descriptions are dark.
Randi_Coulter Randi_Coulter Aug 21, 2013 04:59PM
wow. i read the first sentence and i cringed. lol. reading more!!