The Last of Her Kind (hobbit fanfic)

The Last of Her Kind (hobbit fanfic)

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wildwolfmagic By wildwolfmagic Updated Dec 19, 2015

"Once there were many... Now, there is only me." Beorn's eyes held a shadow of sorrow and loss beneath them.

"I might not be so sure of that."
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The Skin-changers were once a proud people who lived in the Misty Mountains. That was before the orcs invaded. All were either killed or enslaved for sport. All but Beorn died eventually in those caverns. Or so he thought...
Niatha was born a skin-changer until their race was taken by the goblins. She believed she was the only survivor, and so did he. Her help is needed on the quest to Erebor. On this quest she will discover that she is not alone in this world. She is not the last...
Trust is a thing that must be earned the hard way: there are no short-cuts, not cheats. A problem like this could mean the exposing of the most closely guarded secret a girl has ever held, for dwarves fear and hunt what they believe to be a threat. Even if they don't fully understand its meaning.

Disclaimer-all but Niatha is owned by Tolkein and Peter Jackson.

I love this!!  There are some flaws, but you have a similar writing style to me and I really like the premise of the story.  I can't wait to see where it goes next!!
No offense or anything, but I think "baring" is supposed to be "bearing". Also, I've noticed that you switch the point of view a lot. Can you please change that? Thanks.
Erebor?
                              There's also 13 Dwarves
                              Thorin, Dwalin, Balin, Kili, Fili, Bifur, Bofur, Bombur, Ori, Nori, Dori, Oin, and Gloin
                              The others are Bilbo and Gandalf
hqppypie hqppypie May 19, 2015
This is written like "The sign of the Beaver"  book and I love it! 
AliTheHunter AliTheHunter Apr 16, 2015
What's your first middle earth story? Sorry if this has already been asked. I don't have wifi at the moment and can't see the comments.
Book_Monster_Rawr Book_Monster_Rawr Apr 14, 2015
Wait... second!? I JUST found out about these fanfics in here and I... my mind is blown. No wonder I'm not smart