Running From the Devil

Running From the Devil

2.8K Reads 186 Votes 18 Part Story
arander By arander Updated Dec 01, 2014

Laney is running from a sadistic husband when she stumbles upon a network of women committed to helping relocate battered women.  On the way she attracts the attention of Ben, a local pack enforcer, who is intrigued enough to follow her.  What happens when his assertive personality meets her wounded soul?

  • abuse
  • fate
  • healing
  • love
infinitywordlover infinitywordlover Oct 14, 2014
The description is amazing, and the flow is great. I'm really curious to discover what exactly is Ben. I'm kind of apprehensive however because I don't usually read more "adultier" stories.
- - Oct 02, 2014
Omg this is such a great first chapter! Plus I like the little bit of comedy you put into it! I really dislike her husband...I swear if I ever get my hands on him he wouldn't see the light again. >:( anyways great chapter and very good imagery! I feel like I'm there in the story myself :)
DragonsCanBeBeaten DragonsCanBeBeaten Sep 21, 2014
I love this! I mean you really hooked me from the first sentence I was so into it that I moved on to the next chapter without voting (I came back though) haha.
krissyluvsyou krissyluvsyou Sep 20, 2014
I followed her stink, I mean scent. OHMYGOODDD I WAS LAUGHING SO HARD AT THIS PART YOU DONT EVEN KNOW. 'Damnation' I love it
buckskin_equus buckskin_equus Sep 11, 2014
Wow, beautiful descriptions, believable characters and a kicker of an opening chapter. Only point I can make is the multiple POV's in one chapter. It was a refreshing read.
jhepong24 jhepong24 Sep 03, 2014
Book Club- Wow, just wow! There isn't a single detail left unaccounted for. It was very gripping and beautiful!