Running From the Devil

Running From the Devil

2.7K Reads 186 Votes 18 Part Story
arander By arander Updated Dec 01, 2014

Laney is running from a sadistic husband when she stumbles upon a network of women committed to helping relocate battered women.  On the way she attracts the attention of Ben, a local pack enforcer, who is intrigued enough to follow her.  What happens when his assertive personality meets her wounded soul?

infinitywordlover infinitywordlover Oct 14, 2014
The description is amazing, and the flow is great. I'm really curious to discover what exactly is Ben. I'm kind of apprehensive however because I don't usually read more "adultier" stories.
- - Oct 02, 2014
Omg this is such a great first chapter! Plus I like the little bit of comedy you put into it! I really dislike her husband...I swear if I ever get my hands on him he wouldn't see the light again. >:( anyways great chapter and very good imagery! I feel like I'm there in the story myself :)
DragonsCanBeBeaten DragonsCanBeBeaten Sep 21, 2014
I love this! I mean you really hooked me from the first sentence I was so into it that I moved on to the next chapter without voting (I came back though) haha.
krissyluvsyou krissyluvsyou Sep 20, 2014
I followed her stink, I mean scent. OHMYGOODDD I WAS LAUGHING SO HARD AT THIS PART YOU DONT EVEN KNOW. 'Damnation' I love it
buckskin_equus buckskin_equus Sep 11, 2014
Wow, beautiful descriptions, believable characters and a kicker of an opening chapter. Only point I can make is the multiple POV's in one chapter. It was a refreshing read.
jhepong24 jhepong24 Sep 03, 2014
Book Club- Wow, just wow! There isn't a single detail left unaccounted for. It was very gripping and beautiful!