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Pen Your Pride
Forgive Me

Forgive Me

95.7K Reads 998 Votes 35 Part Story
Cheesehead By cheesehead Completed

Jackie has been sick for the longest time. Ever since she was young, she's had cancer attacks over and over again, but has some how always been able to get better. As the years pass the relationship between Jackie and her four brothers and one sister get stronger. Jackie's younger sister, Julie, is also struggling. She has spent her life helping her sister through the cancer and dealing with her acoholic mother. So Julie is in a need of an older sister now more then ever. Is the sister bond able to push through the cancer Jackie has? And also, something funny has been going on with Julie's best friend, what is up with that? Read to find out;)

  • adult
  • baby
  • beer
  • best
  • birthday
  • book
  • boys
  • brother
  • brothers
  • cold
  • collapsed
  • cry
  • dancing
  • dating
  • dizzy
  • drinking
  • drunk
  • eyes
  • fan
  • fiancee
  • fixed
  • friend
  • gasped
  • grumbled
  • halls
  • hemerson
  • hissed
  • home
  • hospital
  • hot
  • jackie
  • knife
  • laughed
  • loved
  • memories
  • moaned
  • muscular
  • nerve
  • nurse
  • older
  • overprotective
  • pain
  • pouted
  • punished
  • relax
  • rushed
  • shrugged
  • sick
  • sister
  • skateboarding
  • smacked
  • smiled
  • smoking
  • snapped
  • sneered
  • snickers
  • teacher
  • tears
  • teased
  • text
  • threw
  • uncomfortably
  • wedding
  • wide
  • wrong
thecoffeekid thecoffeekid Feb 08, 2011
its reaaaaalllllyy GOOD Keep it up. A really good way to get people to read on. Well done :)
                              can you please check out my story
                              It is called He will become irresitible.
                              thnx sosososososo much
KimmyB KimmyB Oct 01, 2010
I just wanted to let you know that this is my fave story so far on wattpad I can't wait for the next part. Please keep writing coz I'm hooked! I was from the first chapter, it's a great story :) please don't leave us hanging too long, I love it :) 
darkdestiny darkdestiny Sep 27, 2010
I loved it! really jackies only 5 i thought she was a teenager lol? so julies one? four years isnt a big age diff, lol me and lil bro are ten years apart!! =)
SapphireMadness SapphireMadness Aug 06, 2010
whow, mean mom. lol =D i think its really good. and you wrote alot like an achalle book, maybe even getting it published 1 day. :) anyways it was really good, keep writting. =D 
jamilla_ jamilla_ Jul 14, 2010
it's nice....... i like the first part.... very professional
chockslam chockslam Jun 25, 2010
wowed with your prologue! it's cool!! liking it!!
                              even if it's 6 parts, i'll keep on reading!!=)