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Scattered Memories(ON HOLD)

Scattered Memories(ON HOLD)

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Elizabeth By Scattered_Roses Updated Jun 13, 2011

All her life Rosemarrie has been left out of school activities, school friends, the orphanage, and so on. When she felt down she would always go to her happy place "The Secret Garden." She meet an owl there named Roger that has always been with her. But now "The Secret Garden" was sold, she's homeless, and things are happening to fast around her, new transfer students, new dimension, and new love??

concentricxx concentricxx Jul 01, 2011
It's good writing, but I would suggest that you try to kind of thread in the information about her past while having the story progress, instead of just putting it all in a paragraph at the beginning of the story.
Scattered_Roses Scattered_Roses Jun 17, 2010
Lol i'll be uploading tonight or tomorrow morning:) glad you like it. :)
thegirlinfeathers thegirlinfeathers Jun 17, 2010
please continue! i will throw you in jail if u do not! jk :)
Scattered_Roses Scattered_Roses Jun 16, 2010
If you like the story and want it to be continued please tell me :)
Scattered_Roses Scattered_Roses Jun 16, 2010
@angelheaven101 I just edited and added more detail tell me what you think. :)
angelheaven101 angelheaven101 Jun 16, 2010
i like this. it's interesting. kinda...rushed. well it's really rushed now tht i mention it. I wish you would've talked about details.