Aurore le soleil: A Cinderella story.

Aurore le soleil: A Cinderella story.

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Amelia By MillsJane Updated Oct 06, 2012

*Note: I am halfway through editing, so some names may be different, and some bit may not make sense. And the description sucks. Chapters that have been edited are the Prolouge and Chapter 1.*


When Adele Courtwell has her baby, Aurore, it is her ultimate sacrifice. Left alone to be raised by her father, Aurore is of sharp wit and mind. But after he remarries, her father dies. She is all alone in the world. She cries herself to sleep every night because of the torture she survives in the day. She becomes a slave, working for her stepmother and stepsisters. She recieves an invite to the Princes Ball, for she is still listed as a lady. Banned from going, she still sneaks out. The prince and Aurore fall in love. Is it possible that Aurore will become the Queen? Maybe she might, because hope shows up in the darkest places.

  • abuse
  • alice
  • baby
  • ball
  • camille
  • cinderella
  • cry
  • death
  • edmund
  • ella
  • ethel
  • france
  • hate
  • hurt
  • ivy
  • love
  • prince
  • princess
  • queen
  • sad
  • scary
  • shoe
  • wedding
angela98 angela98 Oct 10, 2012
Not very into Historical fiction but this was a good start :)
Smile4real Smile4real Oct 10, 2012
Very nice start. Loved it. I am liking your descriptions and the intensity of the characters. I would suggest that you break up your first chapter just a little. It is just a tad to big. But either way just a suggestion. You know what works best for your story. Voted.
mokitaCE mokitaCE Oct 09, 2012
LOVE your descriptions!!!!! So unique :D One thing i would suggest is making your paragraphs shorter and a little closer together. (I'm speaking from experience because everyone told me to until I did it :P) Good job!!!!!!
_trapt _trapt Oct 09, 2012
Wow. This actually captivated me to read more, and I plan on doing it :) Great job and sad :(
ineffablethoughts ineffablethoughts Oct 09, 2012
It's an interesting prologue I believe. Maybe break a line between one timeline to another? Like when Adele gives birth and dies to when a month later? For us lazy readers it might get a bit confusing. Other than that, I liked the concept. Keep it up!
ShellWebb1 ShellWebb1 Oct 08, 2012
Interesting and sad. I would break this up a little better though