short rated r storys

short rated r storys

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luna By lunasapphirerosemoon Updated Jan 20, 2017

Rated r

  • birthday
  • breeding
  • dominated
  • gangbang
  • husband
  • impregnated
  • kinky
  • shortstory
NotHoldingOntoYou NotHoldingOntoYou May 30, 2017
Just suggestions, you should kind of build up to the situation more and separate your paragraph. Love the idea tho
Kdodd84 Kdodd84 Oct 25, 2016
Im sorry, I have to stop reading. The spelling, grammar and punctuation is so poor that its very off putting and distracting. The enjoyment of reading isnt there. 
                              May I suggest you type your stories into a word processor first and run spell check before transferring it to wattpad.
ScarletRozy ScarletRozy Sep 24, 2016
Tip. Learn how to spell some words correctly. Also use punctuation: dots, comma, question mark. Those such things make a huge difference and it reads better.
angelinthewoods angelinthewoods Mar 11, 2013
i was having a hard time reading this because there wasnt a single period in it. love the concept though