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short rated r storys

short rated r storys

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luna By lunasapphirerosemoon Updated Jan 20

Rated r

Just suggestions, you should kind of build up to the situation more and separate your paragraph. Love the idea tho
Kdodd84 Kdodd84 Oct 25, 2016
Im sorry, I have to stop reading. The spelling, grammar and punctuation is so poor that its very off putting and distracting. The enjoyment of reading isnt there. 
                              May I suggest you type your stories into a word processor first and run spell check before transferring it to wattpad.
ScarletRozy ScarletRozy Sep 24, 2016
Tip. Learn how to spell some words correctly. Also use punctuation: dots, comma, question mark. Those such things make a huge difference and it reads better.
angelinthewoods angelinthewoods Mar 11, 2013
i was having a hard time reading this because there wasnt a single period in it. love the concept though