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The Hatred Within (NarutoFanFic)

The Hatred Within (NarutoFanFic)

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Zimity By Zimity Updated Jul 23, 2016


Naruto Uzumaki, has been betrayed by his home village, The Hidden Leaf, as they banish him. How and which path will he travel on next? Is it the path of hatred or the path of forgiveness?

-Mystic-Night- -Mystic-Night- Sep 25, 2016
Well Konoha you have made a deadly enemy WELP I'm moving to Suna
I'd help be an editor (despite the fact I'm late af)
                              Provided you don't mind it being edited by a brit. And a 12 year old.
(Somebody get this reference, please)
                              The purgatory revengers strike again...
chris_akira chris_akira Jan 07
I will contribute to helping with the editing. I have been told by many adults that my diction and word choice is excelling for students my age. That's a lot, especially considering that I am only 12.
AnimalLover257 AnimalLover257 Oct 06, 2015
So will I. I have been told that I am a great writer, and I know that I am good with grammar (it's my specialty). So, if you need help with writing, I would love to volunteer. :)
Zimity Zimity Aug 22, 2014
Thank you! I'll make sure that the next chapter is twice as better than the first!