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Pen Your Pride
Buried Deep [B1]  *Major Editing*

Buried Deep [B1] *Major Editing*

586K Reads 2.8K Votes 32 Part Story
Taylor Hallon By hallonn23 Completed

The windy city of Chicago has gained a notorious reputation. The most dangerous city in America. It is shrouded by violence and even the efforts of the police force cannot stop the rising crime rates.

Young men are often forced to turn to the local gangs in their neighborhoods. They end up trapped in an evil, unforgiving world. Spencer is no different. His mother walked out on him when he was young, leaving him with his alcoholic father, and no structure in his life.

 In his search for that lost stability, he happens across the leader of the Southside gang who takes him under his wing. He shows him the support the gang can offer, but before he knows it, Spencer is stuck in a life littered with murders, thieves, and drug dealers who will spend numerous years behind bars. The more he risks his life for the gang, the more of himself he loses. 

Although he enjoys the thrills of his new life and loves being apart of the brotherhood; one day a new girl shows up and turns his world upside down. She helps him rediscover the meaning of life. She helps him uncover his human emotions he has buried deep within him.

 Unfortunately, it may be too late.

Cover done by the wonderful @LazyBrew

Copyright 2018 Taylor Hallon

  • action
  • badboy
  • conflict
  • crime
  • dangerous
  • dark
  • death
  • drugs
  • emotional
  • featured
  • feelings
  • fiction
  • fight
  • guns
  • life
  • love
  • murder
  • relationship
  • romance
  • romantic
  • rough
  • stength
  • struggle
  • thriller
  • youngadult
I have just read the prologue and already in love with this story!
MairaDawn MairaDawn Jun 02
A great start as I mentioned above. Spencer is a likable character and the setting is appropriate. The pacing was great and it's very well written. I didn't see any typos.  :) I hope my suggestions help you and are what you're looking for, if not, please let me know and i will adjust. :)
*cries like a madwoman* Love the opening. It's intense and gripping, already liking the MC too :)
MairaDawn MairaDawn Jun 02
I would take out the because between grimaced and the.
                              Nice description of Cayden. :)
BEHaynes BEHaynes Jun 01
What an intriguing start to your story. This definitely hooked me in and made me want to continue reading!  #FBE
praaaaachii praaaaachii Jun 06
I’m already hooked from the beginning! This sounds very promising