Just Keep Breathing

Just Keep Breathing

332 Reads 7 Votes 5 Part Story
Ashley Newman By falling_ashes Updated Apr 24, 2011

Lane is dead, Ava is heartbroken, and everyone blames her. Is Ava really to blame though? Rumors are flying about what really happened that day, but are any of them true? Join Ava in her journey of finding out that sometimes holding on can hurt more then letting go, that sometimes you'll find friends in the strangest places, and that sometimes forgiving yourself can be the greatest challenge.

help-me-think-of-one help-me-think-of-one Apr 26, 2011
Next time, try putting your Author's Notes at the end of chapters. Just be careful with that, because it can be very confusing. Another way of separating them would be to write your Author's Notes in Italics.
help-me-think-of-one help-me-think-of-one Apr 26, 2011
Great start. Just be careful with spacing out your paragraphs. When a story looks clumped together and bulky, readers will be less likely to read it because it looks unattractive.