On The Other Side of the Screen

On The Other Side of the Screen

3.2K Reads 60 Votes 16 Part Story
Haley Michelle By MissHaleyMichelle Completed

Everyone has a secret, people aren't always as they seem.

Wannabeghost Wannabeghost Jun 27, 2010
hmm Eva is sort of meh, but I can still see her view point. Who doesn't want attention? 
Wannabeghost Wannabeghost Jun 27, 2010
ha the two comments below used the word 'captivated' which actually is a perfect description. the plot is familiar but the words are prettier.
wendyandpeterpan wendyandpeterpan Jun 27, 2010
I'm taken back, in shock, unlike most stories here,
                              this flows beautifully together. 
                              
                              Somethings you should consider fixing are :
                              paragraphs & cut sentences.
                              This would make it easier on the reader.
                              
                              The story plot is captivating & has a good start.
                              I'll be sure to check out more soon!  (:
CharliSanz CharliSanz Jun 17, 2010
dang ... if i could i'd flip her off that's just mest up man ...
MissHaleyMichelle MissHaleyMichelle Jun 16, 2010
@Cqari2Sweet haha, thanks so much! I'm new on here is why. =]
Cqari2Sweet Cqari2Sweet Jun 16, 2010
Idk why people arent voting for this story! I mean this story is awesome! :D