This story is finished, and hopefully will start an official editing process very soon. (Right now I am only in the editing of conventions.) Everyone who has read it is at different points-- my swim team friends aren't very far, and my Instagram friends are about halfway done! But I'm going to keep apace on here as I keep apace with my Instagram friends, and I hope to catch up with them as soon as possible. For those who haven't read it, I got the foundation for the story from a tumblr post. It takes place in Amity, a 200-person town in Maine, where people find their "soul mates" based on special necklaces that they have. The closer one gets to their soul mates, the warmer the necklaces get, and the further away they get from each other, the colder the necklaces get. This story follows Eva, a fifteen-year-old girl whose necklace is always warm. It would be a HUGE help to me if everyone and anyone could comment! It could be about anything-- conventional errors, spelling errors, grammatical errors, anything that you think I could improve on, anything that doesn't make sense. I've pointed out a few things to myself, and I've gotten spelling and grammatical corrections from others, but it would also he a HUGE help if you could all do it on here, too! Thank you VERY much!