Kidnapped with One Direction :Completed:

Kidnapped with One Direction :Completed:

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Hannah Ames By hannieames Completed

Hannah is in a dark room, waiting, then the lights come on, as she blinks from the brightness,she sees them, One Direction...
why are they here? she wonders.

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I have five sisters and 1 bro, plus three other siblings but I don't know the gender
mrsniallhoran529 mrsniallhoran529 Jul 24, 2016
Making my way downtown, pace is fast, faces pass and I'm homebound
penelopejulie penelopejulie Mar 08, 2016
It's a good story but it could really do with lots of editing. Put way less commas so there are separate sentences, and add more description 👍🏼
Storm_The_Neko Storm_The_Neko Jul 11, 2016
Please use proper grammar. I find it hard to read it without proper grammar, I mean I don't know when the next sentence starts. (Just saying)
OneDirectionGumyBear OneDirectionGumyBear Jan 27, 2016
Why does it creep me out that she dresses EXACTLY like Louis?😂
penelopejulie penelopejulie Mar 08, 2016
This is good and booking but it could really do with some editing plus less commas and more description .