Kidnapped with One Direction :Completed:

Kidnapped with One Direction :Completed:

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Hannah Banana By HannahDirection Completed

Hannah is in a dark room, waiting, then the lights come on, as she blinks from the brightness,she sees them, One Direction...
why are they here? she wonders.

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Making my way downtown, pace is fast, faces pass and I'm homebound
Please use proper grammar. I find it hard to read it without proper grammar, I mean I don't know when the next sentence starts. (Just saying)
This is good and booking but it could really do with some editing plus less commas and more description .
asmath12345 asmath12345 Oct 28, 2015
ok who thinks talking to posters is a good way ( that does work) to tell everything and feel better
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demtra demtra Sep 11, 2015
THAT IS NOT WERID I PRTEND HARRY STYLES IS MY BROTHET AND MY FULL NAME IS CARISSA GARVIA MALKIABEDEWARD ELEBITH GRIER MILLER STYLES
jdr812 jdr812 Sep 05, 2015
lol same jk I don't have any posters I've. been teased enough by my 3 brothers