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Her Decision

Her Decision

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Do you want to know? By tsarbobsburgers Completed

Emma Spielberg has been scorned one too many times by men. Being the heiress to a billion-dollar company, she was always seen as a dollar sign as opposed to what she truly was.
Chase Vanderbeek was a hard-working man scraping off what he could to survive in this economy. He was lucky and got a big break when his application for a large corporation was answered.

When he first met Emma Spielberg, sparks flew, or so she thought.

They were both surprised seeing each other at the job interview that Emma was conducting.

Was he using her for his personal gains?

Will they over come their differences and lack of communication?

Will the sparks return?

That is her decision to make.

“Don’t ever confuse love and trust. Love and trust are two completely different things."

EverSarcastic EverSarcastic Sep 03, 2014
This is a good start and very capturing! I love how Emma's personality is making her snarky :D
Autumn_Breeze Autumn_Breeze Aug 31, 2014
Damn, I was hoping Viktor and Rachel wouldn't be around. Either way, good start. I was always fond of Emma.
Katherynn Katherynn Aug 21, 2014
This left me a bit confused at places...but this is just a comment not a review. Oops. haha.
                              I like it. It really isn't something I'd normally read. But you've got a good concept :) Keep it up.
inkedpromises inkedpromises Aug 21, 2014
This chapter got me hooked immediately. The concept is amazing and I cannot wait to read more.
machinasai machinasai Aug 16, 2014
First and foremost, I love your blurb!!! The way you wrote your story was nice. It was persuading me to continue reading on. Your dialogue was fun to read. It wasn't overpowering the descriptions!!!
                              OVERALL, GOOD START!
KelseyPamelia KelseyPamelia Aug 12, 2014
Other than that its good. It might just be me, but I found myself skipping pages searching for feelings. Because that are what books are for feelings if not for them it word just be words on a page.