Loved You Once, Love You Still

Loved You Once, Love You Still

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Alex By madaldoll Updated Apr 08, 2011

Andromeda "Andy" Veron,  a 15-year-old girl from a middle-class family, intelligent, pretty, open-minded, compassionate, but can be a bit rebellious, She's her family's jewel, the school's queen, a 'princess' in her own world. Of course, she had everything. Until that day, when she lost her world.  When she lost him, her treasured prince. Follow her journey through her memories, that she prefers to forget, and meet the girl who loved him once, and loves him still.

ColorfulQuirks ColorfulQuirks Apr 13, 2011
I agree, the poem is amazing. It grabbed me into the story. There were no errors as far as I could see, and I feel the emotions of the main character. Will read on! :D
madaldoll madaldoll Apr 13, 2011
Thank you! Oh geez, seems like it's really that little poem that got you guys! :)
                              
                              @RunsWithFlyingPocky Really? Haha. I tried singing it too when I first made it.
madaldoll madaldoll Apr 13, 2011
@Antebellum_Lady  @lucky97  @MarlaAnnRogers Thank you so much guys! (:I appreciate it.
                              @octoberiswild sure no problem! (: 
                              @DianaPena Oi Diana! Haha. Sorry for that.. :P And thanks for pointing that out! What a mistake, double use of past tense. -.- Haha, thank you, really!
octoberiswild octoberiswild Apr 12, 2011
good luck in the wattys- i Really hope you checked out mine in response
madaldoll madaldoll Apr 12, 2011
Thank you so much nice! Well, it seems like I started pretty well. I hear my story kind of gets boring, but no, I tell you, it doesn't really. It was my cousin who told me. :| Maybe it does, but to me? Nah. It's alright. :P Really, thanks guys for liking that little poem!
musicalsweets musicalsweets Apr 12, 2011
The poetry at the beginning is fantastic! What a good way to begin a story. I can't wait to read more! :)