The Red Stains (On Hold)

The Red Stains (On Hold)

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Ella Charlotte By EllaCharlotte Updated Dec 09, 2011

-I feel the familiar cool arms rapping themselves protectively around my body but it is almost like they aren’t there, like they’re a flickering which can’t effect me. The hollowness continues to echo through me drawing me deeper into its midst, pulling me further away from those comforting arms.-


When all you ever loved is ripped away from you in seconds leaving you hurt and abandoned, it leaves a mark. For Heather this mark runs deep haunting her once normal life and constantly threatening to pull her into the black abyss that lives within her troubled soul. Her only protection from falling into the horror of her own head is her older brother James who has been her support for almost her whole life. 
One day Heather and James decide to transfer to Shalimen Boarding School, Heather expects it to be like any other school she’s been to but she soon realizes that nothing is what it seems.   
Heather loses all hope when she realizes James, the one she has always trusted the most is hiding something, something big. 
What secrets is he keeping from her? 
Why is everyone so curious about her?
What’s with the red stains?


Follow Heather as she struggles with the memories that haunt her and attempts to figure out a world full of secrets hiding right under her nose. But what part does Heather play in the bigger picture? Is she really human?

  • adventure
  • bite
  • blood
  • boarding
  • boys
  • brother
  • confusion
  • dorm
  • elladay
  • eyes
  • fantasy
  • friends
  • girl
  • guy
  • guys
  • hate
  • high
  • hot
  • humor
  • love
  • magic
  • mystery
  • new
  • power
  • red
  • room
  • roomie
  • school
  • secret
  • secrets
  • shy
  • stains
  • start
  • suspense
  • vamp
  • vampire
YayHaboo YayHaboo Nov 30, 2013
It's serious good!
                              Love it! Can't stop checking if you have updated!!
                              Keep writing<3
LizzyLouLou LizzyLouLou Jun 08, 2011
Great beginning! :) There's some spelling mistakes and some other stuff, but only minor. Definitely voting. :-)
EasterBunny445 EasterBunny445 Jun 04, 2011
There are a couple of grammar errors, but otherwise this is very captivating!!! :D
EllaCharlotte EllaCharlotte Jun 03, 2011
@peculiarpianist 
                              thanks :)
                              yeah i really should proof read :P
EllaCharlotte EllaCharlotte Jun 02, 2011
@rimmie558 @Armiella @peculiarpianist 
                              thank you all x
                              opps my bad - thanks for pointing it out to me 
RimUranium RimUranium Jun 02, 2011
Aww poor James!!!! He's such a sweet, yet protective brother <3 such a sweetheart!!!! They're such a great pair of siblings and James would definitely be my choice of a brother if I could XP <3 voted!