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Switch (Twisted)

Switch (Twisted)

478K Reads 6.1K Votes 12 Part Story
a.n.shackleford By anshackleford Updated Aug 05, 2013

He pushes his full length into me and I scream, trying to pull my body away from his. He holds me in place, slamming into me a few times before he stills. My breathing is harsh and my body is trembling, I can barely hold my body up. He rotates his hips in a circular motion, grabbing my hands at the same time, pinning me to the bed. Our fingers are interlocked and he begins to rock. When he comes out, he pulls me down. One of his hands circle around and he presses down on my belly. I gasp at the sensation in my belly. "I can feel me inside you," He whispers as he leans over me. He grabs my free hand and brings it to my belly. "Do you like how I feel, Gabrielle?" He thrusts into me hard and I feel him through my skin. "Noah!" I moan loudly. He grunts and smacks my ass. I yelp in surprise. It stings but its an erotic sensation. He slaps the other cheek and my body shakes. "Tell me what you want Gabrielle," He mutters. My body ignites and my skin tingles. The red walls becomes redder, the light becomes brighter, and the smell of sex becomes stronger. "Please Noah," I beg. He rotates his hips again but faster. My senses flash with "Caution! Explosives Activated!" "Come, Gabrielle," He whispers as he slams into me again. My vision goes black as my climax hits me like a thousand bolt of lightning. My head flying back as I scream, Noah reaches his peak also. He holds onto my body and groans. My vision returns brighter than it was before and I collapse on the bed. Noah rolls me over and unties the tail of the whips quickly. He kisses each of my wrists while rubbing slow circles with his fingers. He's one of those sweet dominants. He takes the time to inspect his submissives. I mentally smack myself. You're not his submissive, I chant to myself. "Did I hurt you?" He mutters. I shake my head then smack his face. "Thats for tying me up." I say as I begin to pull my underwear back on. He grins that heart stopping smile and kisses me.

claudia_sawyer23 claudia_sawyer23 Sep 04, 2014
Great story! And I agree with most of your comments about the viewers.
Nichola_Royse Nichola_Royse Aug 06, 2013
I really like this story. I never read Fifty Shades of Grey, but I imagine it's like this, only the guy is Dominant...
Iam_Echo Iam_Echo Apr 18, 2013
Just like fifty shades but the other way around. I liked it :)
ThePseudonymWriter ThePseudonymWriter Apr 15, 2013
This story is amazing. please I'm dying for an update. I love your writing! I hope I get that much views like you have some day on my story!
Luvme4me2012 Luvme4me2012 Oct 14, 2012
I already love fifty shades and I love this one. I love her so much  she is a feisty Dom.
NoPressureJustBoxers NoPressureJustBoxers Sep 22, 2012
Hahahah this is awesome :D I saw 'Fifty Shades' in your summary and about lept out of my chair :D I can't wait to read more :]]