Modern Magic

Modern Magic

14.5K Reads 169 Votes 15 Part Story
Clinton By clintonmanual Completed

When the Gods are at war, everyone suffers. Magic is set loose in the modern world, causing havoc worldwide. Could an incomplete prophecy be the key to saving the world? Could the hero really be a 17 year old kid?

  • caller
  • cant
  • give
  • magic
  • modern
  • moon
  • orginal
  • original
TravelingDimensions TravelingDimensions Aug 01, 2012
I've read the prologue and although it was very interesting, it gave me a cheesy sort of feel. How many stories start with a person waking up from a nightmare and screaming? A lot. However, you're writing is very good and I bet the story is a lot better than the prologue.
CindyyNguyen CindyyNguyen Jul 29, 2012
This is kind of different from all the others books I read which are usually romance and teen life. i don't know how I should critique this story. I like how descriptive and detailed. Great job
Somnos Somnos Jul 29, 2012
Writing seems solid, and wow does this seem eerily similar to my story in one respect. Anyway, I am moving on to the next chapter and will leave something more substantial there.
dreamernow31 dreamernow31 Jul 26, 2012
Wow, this is a great prologue! I love your style of writing and the intro :D in your 3rd sentence, though, you said, "its been for me..." the its should have an apostrophe :) Other than that, you have no mistakes! Great job and keep up the good work! :D
suzune suzune Jul 26, 2012
what he dreams will definitely become a vision to that kid.....some creepy things will come out.so.good luck  to that kid and to you AUTHOR..nice piece. (like2)
clintonmanual clintonmanual Jul 25, 2012
@WickedCupcake that made me giggle. I'm afraid of heights too so i feel you