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To love an Alien - Sholan Alliance 1

To love an Alien - Sholan Alliance 1

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Mad Max By maxd01 Completed

Undergoing massive editing.  I have unpublished all chapters and will republish as I finish editing.  Satasha was a Sholan scout who was trying to find the Others who had attacked and destroyed one of their ships.  What she hadn't expected was to have her ship have a catastrophic failure of her navigation hardware.  She was forced to land on the Third Rock from the Sun she was surveying.  How would she cope with being discovered by an alien from that planet?  Would he turn her into the authorities?  How would she get back to her ship?

This is a fan-fic of the Sholan Alliance series by Lissane Norman.

bessie1913 bessie1913 7 days ago
Not as fond of the new cover. Anatomically, it just doesn't seem to work.  The neck seems to lack enough structure and muscle to support the head, especially for a species descended from predators.
core_nxt core_nxt Nov 16, 2016
Also, what kind of power generation do the sholan ships use and what kind do the humans use?
core_nxt core_nxt Nov 16, 2016
This last sentence should probably be "if she didn't they would try to contact her before sending a ship to investigate" since without her weekly report they wouldn't know if she was still alive and thus would need to investigate the situation.
core_nxt core_nxt Nov 16, 2016
Definitely an electric virus, rather than a normal electronic one!!!
bessie1913 bessie1913 Jan 18
Still grin whenever I read the last sentence and find myself holding up my right hand in return salute.
core_nxt core_nxt Nov 16, 2016
And I'm not exactly sure what u mean by the last sentence here, "some days it almost felt like she rattled around in the scooter currently". Do u mean "some days she felt like she was rattling around on a scooter like currently"?