Midnight Run Seeing the Vampire Prince ( On Hold??? 0_o)

Midnight Run Seeing the Vampire Prince ( On Hold??? 0_o)

44.9K Reads 552 Votes 16 Part Story
Maritza By Love_Maritza Updated Feb 27, 2011

Annabelle is the Daughter of Nick and Catherine. A week before she changes fro the First time into a wolf and finds her mate, she is kidnapped during a run by the Vampire Prince. Now how will she get out of this dilemma???

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bbygirlleah bbygirlleah Feb 14, 2015
Every story is different, some shift at 16 and then another book says 18 and then another book says 17
writing_dreamer writing_dreamer Mar 20, 2011
I did read the current 15 parts but this story doesn't suit me. I don't like this story because you give away the plot within the first two chapters and the conversations need a lot of work on.
                              -WD 
shelby8D shelby8D Oct 04, 2010
Oh! And have you read "The Scarlet Letter?" lol! The letter A is not a good thing!  In that book, she had to wear a scarlet letter A on her chest to mark her as an adulteress. Now I'm going to laugh a little every time I think about the vamp dude having the letter A on his chest:) haha
shelby8D shelby8D Oct 04, 2010
The story is interesting, I actually like it:) But you make a lot of spelling and grammar mistakes. I think it would help you a lot to get an editor until you learn how to edit it yourself. P.S. sopposovely isn't a word. I think the word you were looking for was supposedly:) lol On to the next part!
shelby8D shelby8D Oct 04, 2010
I think it sounds interesting:) but their conversations were too unrealistic. People don't talk like that, it's too stiff. However, I'm gonna keep reading:)
Love_Maritza Love_Maritza Jun 18, 2010
@lovelessvampire lol ya :p he is ;] xD thanks for fanining! :]