Jarvit

Jarvit

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Jarvit is appalled to learn his errand, delivering scrolls for his master, is intended to send him to his death. Jarvit is taken captive by the powerful and evil archimage Lord D’Braggatio. Then, befriended by the maid Silva, he discovers he has a mystic connection with Lady Mabina D’Braggatio. But it is the voice in his head that disturbs him most.

  • action
  • dragon
  • dryad
  • dryiad
  • evil
  • fantasy
  • fire
  • gods
  • hero
  • humour
  • knight
  • magic
  • mystery
  • myth
  • myths
  • panther
  • quest
  • servant
  • spells
  • warlock
BreeHolthus BreeHolthus Jan 26, 2017
This story so far looks really good! I'm genuinely interested in where this will go
BreeHolthus BreeHolthus Jan 26, 2017
Lol Where I live in MN, this is a very true statement. No one wears velvet shoes in winter unless your a crazy person. The salt will destroy them.
Late__Nights Late__Nights Jan 05, 2016
If the Lord D'Braggtio wanted to cleanse the throne of Witches, Im assuming......Why does he even have powers?
MelodyTuyak MelodyTuyak May 22, 2015
i was half expecting this story would be tacky. but its not. u write like a pro.
awesomebloss125 awesomebloss125 Mar 24, 2015
Just started up and I'm a new writer it would be great if you could read my book.Critics,Vote,comments Generally anything would be grateful appreciated!
TheMisPlacedWriter TheMisPlacedWriter Nov 04, 2014
I really like how you automatically begin your story with introducing the name "Jarvit" in the first sentence. Just a suggestion, you use his name again in the second sentence which seems a little repetitive, but great work!