Dust

Dust

14 Part Story 55.9K Reads 2.1K Votes
RiverSwensen By RiverSwensen Updated May 29, 2013 03:17AM

Kyle's already dismal life takes a turn for the worst when her colony is attacked by Creatures; the cannibalistic scraps of humanity left after a plague wiped out the majority of Earth. Accidently freeing a captured wild boy in her haste to survive the bloodbath, she acquires an odd ally. The pair set off into The Waste, forming a strained friendship as their worlds clash together with unyielding force.

defiantly an interesting beginning that draws the reader into the story because at this point, you don't really know much.
your story is incredible and i just read the first chapter. I read books really quickly and im always looking for something new and i found your story. I read other peoples comments and then i decied to read for myself. It lived up to the peoples comments to say the least
ZafArielZul ZafArielZul Sep 26, 2012 07:20AM
Amazing introduction to the story, it really draws you in and, grabs you and compel you to read on. 
                                    Which is exactly what I'm gonna be doing!
kristel kristel Sep 11, 2012 07:34PM
This is an amazing Prologue, and your chapter names have got me hooked. Reading on! :)
joanna-t-tran9 joanna-t-tran9 Sep 07, 2012 07:13AM
The very line line was amazing!
                                    
                                    That is awesome that you use the title of the book and put it at the end :)
                                    
                                    It is a good prologue :)
Creinauer Creinauer Sep 06, 2012 02:57PM
I'm enjoying reading this story.  Your voice has an evocative, lyrical quality that is haunting.
                                    
                                    Keep up the good work!