We all know that Hikaru and Kaoru are only twins right? Wrong! Hikaru and Kaoru have a little sister who is their triplet. They don't know her, but she knows them. ~on hold~
It's actually 'triplets' not 'triples' I just noticed the mistake on the chapter title! Still great story!!
(this has nothing to do with the story but....) OMG UR DESCRIPTION TO UR ACCOUNT I LOVE IT!!!!! (bc it's the reality of an otaku [or a weaboo depending on who ya ask])
DONT GO TO THE LIGHT! ITS AN ILLUSION! THAT PLACE IS FULL OF BAKA'S AND DEMONS!
pretty cool. cant wait for the next chapter, you write good.
Hehe, that's really good work. Your tense needs to be worked on a bit, but overall an amazing first chapter.
It has potential. I love anime myself, Ouran High School Host Club was my second ever anime to watch, Vampire knight was my second. Keep writing!