Innocent - EDITING

Innocent - EDITING

11.2K Reads 441 Votes 15 Part Story
lonely insomniac By takemetotulsa Completed

When it comes to the law, seventeen-year-old Dylan Johnson knows her facts inside and out. Give her a textbook, and she'll have the information absorbed in a matter of weeks. Tutoring is a breeze, and getting to know new people is her strong suit. Living alone is a piece of chocolate cake. But throw a little love at her, and her well-built walls can come tumbling down. The story that she's written for herself spirals down around her, shattering everything that she's so used to loving. She's suddenly broken, and so are those walls that for so long shut herself from the pain of the world. Her next question is simple: is Darry Curtis strong enough to rebuild them?
  
  Copyright © 2016 Makenzie Collins
  Disclaimer: I do not own any part of The Outsiders. All characters, settings, and references used belong to the original owner, S. E. Hinton.

I'm only on chapter one but so far this is so well written. Major props to you. I can only hope to write like this someday.
Elvis_and_me1996 Elvis_and_me1996 Aug 27, 2014
this was really great especially when soda won five bucks from Steve
Pepsi_and_Pony Pepsi_and_Pony Aug 14, 2014
I actually like the shorter stories.  This one was interesting, and your stories never end up like I expected.  I liked it a lot, please write some more!