The Medium

The Medium

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BeautifulDisaster00 By BeautifulDisaster00 Updated Jun 19, 2010

Scarlett Roxanne Castro could only hope on being a normal girl. But that all changes when she starts seeing spirits. Her mother says its a gift. But Scarlett thinks its a pain. She never wanted this in the first place! 
As she tries to cope, a spirit falls in love with Scarlett! And he doesnt want to pass over. 

GrrRawrCookies GrrRawrCookies Jun 13, 2010
@angelheaven101 is right. I must agree. You're rushing the good parts that should be slowed down and taken at a better pace. Trust me your story would be much better if you'd put more detail in there. You've got the potential to write a wonderful novel. [[[:
angelheaven101 angelheaven101 Jun 13, 2010
yeah I agree. it was too fast. like you should do describe exactly how she became a medium. like was it on her 15th birthday and she woke up to dead people or was it like some kind of process.