❤Hearts of Pandore❤ (Part 1): The Crossing

❤Hearts of Pandore❤ (Part 1): The Crossing

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strawberry-chan By strawberrykiller37 Completed

In the Realm of Pandore: there are two sides, Lytian and Darkora. Both are mortal enemies, locked in an ancient feud of hatred. One day, the two Princesses from Lytian: Rayne and Braelyn are kidnapped and taken to Darkora as the affect of a twisted war between the nations. Two strangers come across them, and set them free from their captors. Luke and Ryden agree to help them get back to their homeland, although their motives remain a mystery. Along the way they are swept up by pirates and taken on an adventure to find the Key that grants them access to their home. However, while they go in search of the key, they might uncover deadly secrets.

Raven_Starhawk Raven_Starhawk Mar 27, 2012
I enjoyed this intensely.  You have a impressive start here.  I have to read the other chapters now.  I know they will be every bit of amazing.
someone123 someone123 Oct 07, 2010
wow. this is just WOW. i love your vocabulary and your flow of sentences. Not to mention what's in them. This is crazily fantastic. XD
strawberrykiller37 strawberrykiller37 Jul 27, 2010
@Emmiie hurray for your computer!!!
                              
                              and thank you so muchhh for the kind words!! i think i like my prologue the best out of the whole thing so far, hahaha! and to have praise like that come from a talented author like yourself, it means the world to me -bows-
                              
                              thank you!!
ishhy101 ishhy101 Jul 26, 2010
Damn. Im jealous, your such a good writer ; this is absolutely amazing. Cant wait to read more ! ^.^ 
                              <3
Takagi Takagi Jul 05, 2010
I liked this =] Awesome background, and an interesting finish. 
AngelOfAFallen AngelOfAFallen Jul 03, 2010
Gasps. Beautifully done. I wishes to read more. And cause there is more, I shall indulged it writing goodness. XD Then after I'll finally post another chapter. (Hoping two)