I'm Being Adopted by... One Direction?

I'm Being Adopted by... One Direction?

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Kenzie By 1D_equals_my_life Completed

"when you said your last goodbye
i died a little bit inside
i lay in tears in bed all night
alone without you by my side
but if you loved me
why'd you leave me?"


chapters in the beginning may be carroty, they were written in 2012. COMPLETED, SEQUEL COMING NOVEMBER/DECEMBER 2014.

its so weird to read this because my name is grace and i have blue green eyes and dull brown hair... creepy
Deaniabe Deaniabe Aug 01
I'm not trying to be rude, but I would like to point out any mistakes. Constructive criticism. Might help you become a better writer than before.
                              
                              
                              
                              
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                              There should be a period instead of a comma.😘
Deaniabe Deaniabe Aug 01
I'm not one to usually talk about Justin Bieber, but you should listen to purpose on iTunes
It's AMAZAYN! See what I did there amaZAYN? Yes? No? Okay. I'm done now.
I just curl up in a ball and let the warm water hit my side sometimes I cry
I don't think that's how it works 😑
                              
                              Dunno. I could be wrong.