Senses.

Senses.

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Jackk By JackkDaniels Completed

Feel this, taste this, smell this, see this, hear this.

    DelilahLuvsYou DelilahLuvsYou Dec 18, 2013
    I'm addicted to your poems, I think you have me intoxicated...
    Obsessed12 Obsessed12 Apr 10, 2013
    "But, what I really need Is some sleep" was so unexpected lol
    theinkfly theinkfly Jan 04, 2013
    I reread this frequently, too.
                                  I told you about my wall - I'm painting it this weekend
                                  Your writing will be up next to the likes of carol Ann Duffy, lord Byron, t s Elliot.... XD 
                                  And I can't wait to boast about your poems in bluebird either xD 
                                  <3
    LanceRedanican LanceRedanican Jan 03, 2013
    Lack of sleep. Get some sleep. Hahahaha. Without sleep, I can't think well. I suppose that's how it is with humans. Or maybe not. Anyway, I like your rhymes. Well done.
    WilloStars WilloStars Nov 16, 2012
    Beauty of poems being the reader can take what they want from it.
                                  You can want a lot of things but need something/things very basic.
    Mannykin Mannykin Sep 03, 2012
    This is a good poem. I was a bit suprised about the ending though.