NCIS Ziva returns from Israel

NCIS Ziva returns from Israel

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Dana By NcisFanficLover Updated Jun 05

~Ziva left D.C. She wanted to start a new life in Israel. Because her life wasn't like she had always undreamed. She was an agent. She killed people. She didn't want this anymore.~
But then she returned to D.C. ...


That's the translation of my story "NCIS Ziva kehrt zurück aus Israel". But I won't write this exactly like the German one, maybe I'll change some sentences... We'll see...

And -you know- I'm from Germany, English is not my first lenguage. I learn it for many years at school and I'm quite good in English class but yeah - unfortunately not perfect...
So please don't judge me ;) It was nice if you'd comment if I did a lot of mistakes or not.

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catkink catkink Sep 24, 2016
Your english is really good! This is just my personal opinion but I would love some longer chapters. Apart from that I love this story, its started really well😀
ishouldbdoinghwrn ishouldbdoinghwrn Jul 21, 2016
you skip words here and there but it's easy enough to understand and fill in the blanks. Good job!!
1. Love the chapter.
                              2. Maybe.
                              3. Yes. If you have doubts, try Grammarly.
TruffelLid TruffelLid Jan 10, 2016
Well I'm English and so far I haven't found any mistakes. I've learnt German for four years and I'm terrible at it. Sorry.
densi_fangirl densi_fangirl Dec 08, 2015
I won't judge you because I thing its great that even though others think your English is no good your still trying and personally I think your English is great
california_girl_16 california_girl_16 Mar 05, 2015
The chapter is very good and I think Tony will talk about it. 
                              Your English is great!