Don't Let Go

Don't Let Go

1M Reads 16.8K Votes 23 Part Story
Alex By AthenasAngel Updated Jul 21, 2013

It was pure luck that Hannah Avery was driving on the same bridge that Tristan Hunter was ready to end his life by jumping off of. They had never really been friends, but were both aware of the other's existence. Now this horrific event has bound them together - something that neither of them is quite prepared for.

Hozier786 Hozier786 Aug 17
Just threaten him that if he jumps then you'll jump with him
tiny_jen2 tiny_jen2 Aug 23
Wow, this is a really great start to the story. I actually like how you started straight into the plot, not setting it before the attempt. It was a good tactic to help draw the reader in.
This chapter shows that just because someone looks happy..it doesn't mean they are. I'm so happy that he's safe.. 
                              
                              Can relate to this, though.
                              Great chapter, it automatically caught my interest.
KatDog1230 KatDog1230 Mar 09, 2015
In paragraph 16 on page 3 of chapter 1 it says "'I understand, but we do need background, and it MAKE take a while...'" It should say, "'I understand, but we need background and it MAY take a while..." Otherwise, amazing. I think you're really a talented writer.
karinajimeneztho karinajimeneztho Nov 26, 2014
I seriously hate you in already in tears my heart stopped why did you  do this to me god ugh.
civil_darkness civil_darkness Nov 14, 2014
This is like the tenth time I've read this book and there's still tears in my eyes :'(