Clarice Amelia Potter, Harry Potter's elder sister, the adopted daughter of the Malfoys, and the legendary "Slytherin Quidditch Captain," finds love with... Oliver Wood, Gryffindor Quidditch captain?
Oh and then Snape went for Harry.
At least Peter made up for his mistake of selling them to the Dark Lord by trying to warn them but he was too late.
Peter at least tried to make up for it a little. I hate it when like he isn't included in fanfics just cause he messed up, I mean don't get me wrong I hate him as much if not more than the next person but you have to remember they trusted him enough to make him secret keeper soooo...
you're telling a lot and not showing enough in this chapter.
this is a pretty good start. i would describe what the night looked like a bit more though
AHHHH I FRIGGIN LOVE FRIGGIN OLIVER FRIGGIN WOOD!!! OH MY GOD HES PERFECT!!!!