Because you're my Beloved

Because you're my Beloved

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Crystaltrees By Crystaltrees Updated Jun 08, 2015

Marnie Stanford looks like a normal 17 year old girl. She dreams of finding a boy to spend the rest of her life with, to live happily ever after. Although for Marnie this dream means much more. She works in a clothing factory owned by one of the most rich and famous people in the world, who just happens to be a vampire. Only the factory workers and models he employs know. The only way to escape the factory is to reach the age of 30 or get married. One day he visits the factory on a routine inspection and finds out Marnie is his beloved. But does Marnie's dream come true? Will she ever live happily ever after?

TragicAngela TragicAngela Oct 24, 2015
This is very entertaining to me, I don't think it's long and boring
katiekingisyoqueen katiekingisyoqueen Jul 05, 2015
Really good, a few typos and messy sentences but overall a wonderful start to what looks like an interesting story
zelenalh zelenalh Jun 23, 2015
for everyone who doesn't understand, Lorry means a truck. its a huge truck used to transport goods
WriterSunbae WriterSunbae May 19, 2015
that moment when you forget its a vampire book .. lol I didn't remember till here
Stalker_Girlx13 Stalker_Girlx13 Apr 10, 2015
it wasnt really long, and it wasnt boring at all. i liked the chapter
Annabeth107 Annabeth107 Apr 06, 2015
(y) amazing dear!! keep writing!! m findin it intresting not at all borin!!! lets c further!! hheehe :)