I'm Sorry Mr Alpha *EDITING*

I'm Sorry Mr Alpha *EDITING*

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EletricSparks By EletricSparks Updated Jun 06, 2017

"Submit" He growled baring his teeth. She whimpered at the Alphas tone but  kneeled tilting her head to the side and presenting her neck to show him that she's not a threat to him or his pack.

"Why are you on my land" He barked. She whimpered again and tried to think of the words to answer him with. Should she tell him the truth or should I tell him something else.....?

"I won't ask again rouge why are you on my land?"

  • alpha
  • goddess
  • mate
  • midnight
  • moon
  • new
  • pack
  • prisoner
  • rejected
  • star
  • warewolf
  • wearwolf
  • white
  • wolf
KellyFountain9 KellyFountain9 Sep 25, 2017
I just read the snippet of lines, and I love it! Plz continue.
- - Jan 05, 2017
I would think it would burn her........ (warewolfs hate sliver tho........)
Chimellee Chimellee May 19, 2016
First off I'd like to say khaleesi SHOULD BE THE LAST IMAGE TO BE PRESENTED AS A CHARACTER WHO SUBMITS I honestly haaatttee women submitting to men. That is my opinion if you do not care for my opinion they don't read or bother to argue, I just needed to let that loose good bye ✌
bubblove bubblove Sep 12, 2016
Ofcourse u should write the book !!!! It's  the first chapter of the book and I'm already hooked .....!!!!