The Beach House

The Beach House

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allytheo_ By allytheo_ Completed

Ana had known Kyle since they were three she had never thought more of him than a friend but lately she had been feeling weird around him...did she like him...she couldn't 

Ana thought a summer at Kyle's family beach house in Florida would take her mind off her feeling for Kyle but something happened, something she would never forget

  • beach
  • drama
  • fantasy
  • friends
  • love
  • wattys2014
345180VM 345180VM Nov 14, 2015
In the begging you stated with third person narrative the switched to first person
chrissy_jk chrissy_jk Sep 05, 2015
Written very poorly. No good words used. And punctuation was forgotten
greysons_girl greysons_girl Jun 06, 2015
Oooh she's falling for a guy who doesn't just play on the field.....