The Beach House

The Beach House

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allytheo_ By allytheo_ Completed

Ana had known Kyle since they were three she had never thought more of him than a friend but lately she had been feeling weird around him...did she like him...she couldn't 

Ana thought a summer at Kyle's family beach house in Florida would take her mind off her feeling for Kyle but something happened, something she would never forget

345180VM 345180VM Nov 14, 2015
In the begging you stated with third person narrative the switched to first person
chrissy_jk chrissy_jk Sep 05, 2015
Written very poorly. No good words used. And punctuation was forgotten
greysons_girl greysons_girl Jun 06, 2015
Oooh she's falling for a guy who doesn't just play on the field.....