mayas world isnt so great and it keeps getting worse and worse... she feels shes all alone and at the mercy of the waves... or is she?
WARNING:HAS SOME INNAPROPRIATE.... NESS.
Critique: Some grammatical errors, but it was fairly okay. :)
Critique: It's good so far! You just have some grammar errors, but that's about it! :) Good job.
It was good & I hate 2 be rude but, you should edit a few parts but, its still good so far I would like If you read my Boy Meets World stories I have 2 so far. (I have others 2 ...I don't think I am that good...but, ya might like)
@madi_is_moi well... I wasnt going to put shawn in it but dont worry she does get a happy ending. Oh, wait. I got an idea. thank you.
maybe she and Riley could have a little fight in it at some point or there's this group of kids that bully her . And Shawn finds her and takes her in.