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Girl meets world: im only Human.

Girl meets world: im only Human.

54.8K Reads 1.2K Votes 26 Part Story
shelby:) By sneezing22turtle Completed

mayas world isnt so great and it keeps getting worse and worse... she feels shes all alone and at the mercy of the waves... or is she?


AnOrdinaryDay AnOrdinaryDay Aug 11, 2014
Critique: Some grammatical errors, but it was fairly okay. :)
AnOrdinaryDay AnOrdinaryDay Aug 11, 2014
Critique: It's good so far! You just have some grammar errors, but that's about it! :) Good job.
InterracialLuvDuh InterracialLuvDuh Jul 31, 2014
It was good & I hate 2 be rude but, you should edit a few parts but, its still good so far I would like If you read my Boy Meets World stories I have 2 so far. (I have others 2 ...I don't think I am that good...but, ya might like)
sneezing22turtle sneezing22turtle Jul 16, 2014
@madi_is_moi well... I wasnt going to put shawn in it but dont worry she does get a happy ending. Oh, wait. I got an idea. thank you.
petescentz petescentz Jul 16, 2014
maybe she and Riley could have a little fight in it at some point or there's this group of kids that bully her . And Shawn finds her and takes her in.