Katlyn is moving into her new house after graduating high school but this house is like no other, there are new surprises around every corner who knows what she's in for.
I like your use of dialogue. Dialogue always pulls the reader in right away. You should learn the proper way to punctuate it. You build suspense in just a few paragraphs. This is good. Makes me want to read more! Keep up the writing, Alyssa!
@gothgirl ok my story is on hold right now i might finish it later
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@spunkygirl97 thanks i will once i can get it all to fit together i'll post it :-)
I can't wait to read the rest. very interesting.....good job