The New House

The New House

414 Reads 14 Votes 3 Part Story
This Was My First Account By Sup123 Updated Jul 20, 2011

Katlyn is moving into her new house after graduating high school but this house is like no other, there are new surprises around every corner who knows what she's in for.

shopkins shopkins Sep 10, 2010
I like your use of dialogue. Dialogue always pulls the reader in right away. You should learn the proper way to punctuate it.  You build suspense in just a few paragraphs.  This is good.  Makes me want to read more!  Keep up the writing, Alyssa!
Sup123 Sup123 Sep 06, 2010
@gothgirl ok my story is on hold right now i might finish it later
gothgirl gothgirl Jul 30, 2010
PLZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZ CONTINUE! PLZ PLZ PLZ!
Sup123 Sup123 Jun 27, 2010
@spunkygirl97 thanks i will once i can get it all to fit together i'll post it :-)
acdaken23 acdaken23 Jun 17, 2010
I can't wait to read the rest. very interesting.....good job