The Boy in the Basement

The Boy in the Basement

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kales By adorablekitten Updated Jul 01, 2015

When 13 year old Kennedy and her parents move into the house they have  had their eyes on for years, she realizes that she isn't the only child in the house who is curious and wants to know more.

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hedwig934 hedwig934 Dec 22, 2015
You should take out the "and his eyes are beautifully hazel" it just does not match. Maybe put it inside of the paragraph above it. :)
adorablekitten adorablekitten Aug 23, 2014
the door was open because the people were putting some furniture in
artemisiias artemisiias Aug 18, 2014
this is a masterpiece okay but try to change it from bold and italics to normal