The Thespians

The Thespians

1 Part Story 158 Reads 15 Votes
Viola & Kiara By Saint_And_Sinner Completed

Just another act of love...

OwensMartin OwensMartin Oct 24, 2012 09:28PM
Well done! Interesting, powerful, and complex, this work just exudes confidence on the authors level, not so much from the narrator (obviously, I'm pretty sure that's intentional) Anyways, my point is, this is awesome!
seasofme seasofme Sep 05, 2012 03:59PM
Some hard work must have gone into this poem with its uneasy architecture. I admire your obvious complicated thought during its construction. It sure echoes the intricacies of certain relationships.
kukkiekat kukkiekat Aug 23, 2012 01:24PM
yeap honestly i had to use dictionary to understand certain words. nice effort. well deserved. I like reading poems. go through my story' wrong number'
@MaybeImFearless Much thanks, glad you liked it....=)
                                    
                                    -Viola
grapher grapher Aug 20, 2012 07:37PM
A feast of vivid vocabulary leading us through this episodic emotive tale>
                                    Gets my vote
@theamateur Thanks for the cool comment. Glad you liked it...=)
                                    
                                    As for the blabbering, that's fine. I'm rather used to it......;D