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The Thespians

The Thespians

166 Reads 16 Votes 1 Part Story
Viola & Kiara By Saint_And_Sinner Completed

Just another act of love...

OwensMartin OwensMartin Oct 24, 2012
Well done! Interesting, powerful, and complex, this work just exudes confidence on the authors level, not so much from the narrator (obviously, I'm pretty sure that's intentional) Anyways, my point is, this is awesome!
seasofme seasofme Sep 05, 2012
Some hard work must have gone into this poem with its uneasy architecture. I admire your obvious complicated thought during its construction. It sure echoes the intricacies of certain relationships.
kukkiekat kukkiekat Aug 23, 2012
yeap honestly i had to use dictionary to understand certain words. nice effort. well deserved. I like reading poems. go through my story' wrong number'
Saint_And_Sinner Saint_And_Sinner Aug 23, 2012
@MaybeImFearless Much thanks, glad you liked it....=)
grapher grapher Aug 20, 2012
A feast of vivid vocabulary leading us through this episodic emotive tale>
                              Gets my vote
Saint_And_Sinner Saint_And_Sinner Aug 19, 2012
@theamateur Thanks for the cool comment. Glad you liked it...=)
                              As for the blabbering, that's fine. I'm rather used to it......;D