The Transformation [Undergoing Editing]

The Transformation [Undergoing Editing]

441K Reads 4.7K Votes 26 Part Story
Jessica By Jabooker Completed

McKenzie has had a very troubled life, one that at the moment, she doesn't remember. She knows that her parents were murdered and she knows that she along with her brother have been adopted by a sweet young couple, and most of all she knows that she doesn't want this semi-perfect life to end. But there are faults in everything, and it just takes a re-opening of her eyes to see that.

VikkiWaddell VikkiWaddell Jun 22, 2013
this has to be one of the best stories i have read on watpad....i truely enjoyed it from the begining to the end.
CMQuinn CMQuinn Jul 11, 2011
Its nice to see another 14 year old writer (im 14 too) Well done, very nice. This is going to my library. :)
Feather1239 Feather1239 Dec 29, 2010
Absolutly amazing! You should look in to having it published and sold. :) 
Riela_pollie Riela_pollie Nov 06, 2010
Genius* Sorry XD Good thing you didn't deleted this. It would be a such a waste if you did.
Riela_pollie Riela_pollie Nov 06, 2010
Okay, you're defenitely a really geniues writer for a 14 year old girl. You could be young Canse12. You can't be compared with Stephanie Meyer because you write much better than her XD
                              
                              
                              In my opinion :'>
Emmiie Emmiie Aug 09, 2010
@lalobahavegreeneyes1 <- Agreed! :P
                              
                              This story is AWESOME! And I love the picture too! ;-)
                              Good luck in the Watty awards. 
                              officially your fan.
                              - Emma. <3